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To work in a state-owned business or to work in a joint venture——that have became a problem lying ahead of graduates.To a great extent,the choice will influence your life in the future.But it’s unavoidable.As for you,I will choose work in a state-owned business.
There are three reasons to justify my idea.First,to work in a state-owned business is more steady than in a joint venture.The economy of market is like a ocean,the small joint venture will be eliminated if the ocean produces huge waves.Second the environment can be adapted quickly to people who are the native,but in the joint venture you may not understand their the way of solving problems because of the different culture.Last but not least,you may be not able to get high salary but will have a lot of benefits in a state-owned business.
All in all, the different will produce the different outcome.Everyone need to think twice before you choose whether should be in astate-owned business or in a joint venture.Please cherish your choice in the uncertain life.