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April 18 wednesday

Today,i I had a small spat with my roomie.a Actually,i I haven't been very friendly to her  all the time, maybe because iI think she is not beautiful or intelligent enough .I know it's stupid to judge a person by her apperarance and external condiction .

Why am so snobbish,(arrogant), why iI acted like a jerk.

All menhumans are born equal,I can't act like a snob,ly, I shoudn't be snobbish (arrogant), it's wrong. I want to be nice , but iI'm so sensitive,i I always stick out my thorn ,and hurt people when iI'm not careful . Maybe iI'm not fit to live in a crowd ,socialized, I should be alone.

April 18 wednesdayWednesday, April 18

Today,i I had a small spat with my roomie.a  Actually,i I haven't been very friendly to her.  all the time,It's maybe because iI don't think she is not beautiful or intelligent enough .  I know it's stupid to judge a person by their apperarance and external condiction .

Why am so sobbish,whyiwas I so selfish?  Why did I acted like a jerk.?

All menpeople are born equal,I ca.  I shouldn't act like a snob, because it's wrong.  I want to be nice , but iI'm so sensitive,i.  I always stick out my thorn ,out and hurt people when i'm not careful .carelessly.  Maybe iI'm not fit tofor liveing in a cgrowup,and ,I should be left alone.