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2018/04/19

#0 neko [U4SVh4A]

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April 19 Thursday
I read some sad stories on zhihu today.If those stories were real ,if the people in the stories really experienced those things ,I couldn't image how they endure it,how they overcome the difficulties in their life .
Fate is unfair .
Sometimes Ithought I already had a terribleand boring life,but it is not true,if compared with other people in those miserable stories.
May all life be treated welll.

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#1 ねこざむらい [QGBwGBU]

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April 19 ThursdayThursday, April 19

I read some sad stories onabout zhihu today.  If those stories were real , and if the people in the stories really experienced those things , I couldn't imagine how they endure it ,d them, and how they overcoame the difficulties in their life ves.

FatLife is unfair .

Sometimes I thought I already hadve a terrible and boring life, but it is not true,if when compared with other people in those miserablesad stories.

May all lif peoplebe treated welll.

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