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Daily life
2018/04/22
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neko
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中国本土
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英語
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Summer is coming ,the sweltering weather made me very uncomfortable ,so I took a shower in the afternoon,it made me feel better.Recently,Ioften became unfocused.I was not participating in lessons.I don't like taking classes,I perfer to learn by myself ,though it is not efficient.
I don't like my teachers' teaching styles ,their classes are boring ,they often take much time to express one point clearly(他们通常要花很多时间才能解释清楚一个要点).
I'm looking forward to meeting a teacher who is wisdom,who can come up with some new iders,who can open thre door to a new world for his students .
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Summer is coming ,the sweltering weather made me very uncomfortable ,humidity makes me feel unpleasant, so Itookhad a showerin thethis afternoon,it made me feel betterI am refreshed now.
Recently,I often became unfocused.I was not participating in lessonI have been unfocused recently, I have not attended my classes. I don't like taking classes,hem, I perfer to learn by myself, though it is not efficient.
I don't like my teachers'teaching styles ,their classemethod, their lessons are boring , they often take too much time toexpressfucus on cleafying just one pointclearly(他们通常要花很多时间才能解释清楚一个要点).
I'm looking forwardhope to meetinga teacher who isith wisdom, whocanis capable to come up with some new iders,who cand open thredoor to a new world for his/her students .
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