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2019/05/11

#0 Fujiwara [EJY1mZI]

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I think Japanese old architect works are getting bad,for example, bridges and schools. Our society developed over thirty years ago. Architects made at this age come to break. The government should look at this problem.

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#1 yukari [NJSDZAc]

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I think  Japanese old architect works areure is getting bad,worse, for example, bridges and schools.

Our society developed overunbar areas has developed for more than thirty years ago.

Architects made at this age come to breakBuildings which were built in the past started to collapse.

The government should look at this problem.

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