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I'm Shin. I am studing Englis...
2021/02/03
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shin
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性別 / 年齢
男性
/ 35-39
国(地域)籍
日本
言語
日本語
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英語
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I'm Shin.I am studing English every day.
I want to study to get better.
I will teach you Japanese, so please teach me English.
・Profile
age:37
sex：meal
hobby:Watch Japanise Aminetion and American drama(Friends very funny)、write blog
Thank you.
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I'm Shin.
Iamstudingy English every day.
I want tostudy to getlearn better.
I will teach you Japanese, so please teach me English.
・Profile
age:37
sex：meale
hobbyies :Watching Japaniese Aminenimation and American drama(Friends very funny)、writeing blog
Thank you.
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