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Hi, I'm yasu. I'm learning En...

2021/04/11

#0 yasu [ElFUAhI]

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性別 / 年齢

男性 / 35-39

国(地域)籍

日本

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日本語

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英語

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Hi, I'm yasu.
I'm learning English and want to make friends with people from overseas.

Would you like to do language exchange?
It would be great if we could casually exchange messages whenever we feel like it.

I'm not good at speaking, so I want to start with messages. XD.

Thanks! Don't hesitate to send me messages.

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#1 [MiiQZAQ]

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Hi, I'm yasu.

I'm learning English and I want to make friends with people from overseas.overseas friends

Would you like to dohave language exchange?

It would be great if we could text casually exchange messages (whenever we feel like it.)<-- sorry i don't get what you mean xd

I'm not good at speaking, so I want to start with texting messages.

XD.

Thanks!

Don't hesitate to send me messages.

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make overseas/international/foreign friends
make friends abroad
make friends from all over the world

Hi, yasu san! I am a native Cantonese speaker from Hong Kong and I'm learning japanese right now.
If you don't mind that i'm not a native english speaker, let's be friend! I will try my best to help!

2021/04/15

#2 [MiiQZAQ]

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oops, there's a typo.

the last sentence--
i want to start with texting OR i want to start with sending messages
the above are better

2021/04/15

#3 kiki [ImkniII]

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make friends with sb is IDM (idiom/熟語)
the original statement is grammatically correct.

2021/04/18