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Hi! I'm 19 years old living J...
2021/08/24
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sara
[EkiGhwg]
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性別 / 年齢
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/ 15-19
国(地域)籍
日本
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日本語
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英語
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Hi!I'm 19 years old living Japan. I am going to culinary school.
I want a friend who can speak English but I am not good at speak English.
If you don't mind, please send me a message.
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John Smithy
[EymGKHI]
(非母語話者)
Hi!
I'm 19 years old (girl, Japanese woman etc.) living Japan.
I am going to culinary school.（どこの国か書いたほうがいいかも）
I want a friend who can speak English but I am not good at speaking English.
If you don't mind, please send me a message.
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あとは、NHKのラジオ英会話を毎日こつこつ繰り返し聞くことをお勧めします。
がんばれー！外国は楽しいぞー！
2021/08/25
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Nana
[OGVRBjM]
I'm 19 years old living in Japan.
I want a friend who can speak English but I am not good at speak ing English.
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2021/12/19