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2022/04/01
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This is a diary. I'm happy if you correct this diary.こんにちは、
昨日は水曜日でした。授業はありません。11時半頃には起きていたように思います。その後昼食に行くことになって、最初はづき(食堂)だったのが、ちょうどバスが来たのでしわす(食堂)に行くことになりました。その後は写真を大学のロゴの前で撮ることになって、でも結局撮らなくて、雨が降っていたので帰ってきました。
その後夕食に行くことになって、ピカデリーというお店に行きました。何度も行っているお店です。帰りにパンとコーヒーを買いました。
以上です。さようなら
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This is the diary of the seventeenth day.Yesterday was Wednesday, and I didn’t have any classes.
I think I was awake by around eleven-thirty.
Then, I ended up going to lunch. Initially at Haduki, but because a bus just arrived, we ended up going to siwasu and had lunch there.
After that, I ended up going taking photos together in front of the logo of the University, but in the end, we didn’t take photos, and because it was raining, we came back home.
In the evening, I ended up going to dinner together, and we went to a restaurant called Piccadilly, and had dinner. That was a restaurant we had been to many times. On the way home, I bought some bread and a bottle of coffee powder.
That’s it, thank you.
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Ithink I was awake by around eleven-thirty.got up/woke up at about half past eleven
Then, Iended upwas going to have lunch.
Initially at Haduki, but because a bus just arrived, we ended up goinghad planned to go to hatsuki, but the bus had just arrived, so I changed my mind and finally went to siwasu and had lunch there.
After that, I wended up goingt to takinge photostogetherin front of the logo ofthemy University, but in the end,weI didn’t take photos, and becausefor it was raining, weand I had to caome backhome.
In the evening, I wended up going to dinner together, and we went tot to have dinner in a restaurant called Piccadilly,and had dinnwher.e
That was a restaurant weI had been to for many times.
On the way home, I bought some bread and a bottle of coffeepowder.
That’sitall, thank you.
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2022/04/01