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Today’s topic : Y2K
2022/12/08
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英語の勉強をしています。もっと上手に話せるようになりたいです!
料理、音楽、映画、文化などなど、気軽にお話ししたいです~!
I'm studing English and I want to speak much better than now.
I'm interested in cooking, music, movies, culture...and more.
If you want to talk in English or Japanese, please contact me^^
料理、音楽、映画、文化などなど、気軽にお話ししたいです~!
I'm studing English and I want to speak much better than now.
I'm interested in cooking, music, movies, culture...and more.
If you want to talk in English or Japanese, please contact me^^
2022/09/28 更新
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英語
添削内容
I like young people words, they always heard or seem weird but they make me fun. One of this year’s popular young people word is “Y2K”. It means “Year 2000 (two kilos)”. I wander who made this word. Anyway, these days young people find attractive the old days things, and focus on 2000s is Y2K. In that time, Amuro Namie, Hamasaki Ayumi or Morning Musume… there are many celebrates with specific fashioned style, like the long boots with thick shoe sole, Garu, rude socks, which are the socks with rude looks, and so on. They think it’s emotional or Kawaii because there are no fashions like these in these days. My mom said era always repeat again and again, but it’s not all the same. This time’s Y2K is also not as same as in that era. The younger just fun that kind of fashion after school or weekend, not usual school days. Now people all around the word can see the trend in any country. I want to know what is foreign younger’s trends. I herd many foreigners are interested in 70’s J-POP. But how about another things? If you know something what younger generations are interested in, please tell me!
#1
UCCU
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I like young people words, tth language. They always heard orseemlook like weird but theymake me funare fun for me.
One ofthis year’s popular young people wordpopular words in youth language this year is “Y2K”.
It means “Year 2000 (twokilosthousand)”.
I waonder whomadecreated this word.
Anyway, these daysyoung people find attractive, the youth find the olddaysthings are attractive, and focus on 2000s which is Y2K.
there are many celebraties with specific fashioned style, like the long boots with thick shoe sole, Garu, rude socks, which are the socks with rude looks, and so on.
Theyyouth thinkit’sthe old fashions are emotional or Kawaii because there areno fashions like these in these dayn't similar to current fashions.
My mom said era always repeat again and again,but it’s not(how about "era is a circle"?) but it isn't the same all thesatime.
This time’s, Y2K is also not as same as in that era.
Now, peopleall aroundin the world can see theis trend in any country.
I want to know whatisthe youth's trends are in foreignycounger’s trends.tries?
But how aboutanotherthings?
If you know something what youngergenerations are interested in, please tell me!
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If there are any mistake, please forgive me
2022/12/09
#2
Kaoru
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Thank you for your correction! I'd like to write more simple, so your correction is very nice for me^^
2022/12/11