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My kids
2023/01/11
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田中彼方
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2023/01/11 更新
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I have two lovely sons.They are 1 and 3 years old.
They cry a lot, play a lot, sleep a lot, and eat a lot.
I am happy that they are doing well.
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Julia
[lXh2YEA]
I have two lovely sons.
They are 1 and 3 years old. One is 1 year old and the other is 3 years old. They cry a lot, play a lot, sleep a lot, and eat a lot.
I am happy that they are doing well.
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2023/04/05
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Rin
[WIFiRZA]
They are 1 and 3One is a year old and the other is three years old.
They cry a lot, play a lot, sleep a lot,and eat a lot.
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2024/03/18