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2018/04/18
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neko
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April 18 wednesdayToday,i had a small spat with my roomie.actually,i haven't been very friendly to her all the time,maybe because i think she is not beautiful or intelligent enough .I know it's stupid to judge a person by her apperarance and external condiction .
Why am so sobbish,why i acted like a jerk.
All men are born equal,I can't act like a snob,it's wrong.I want to be nice ,but i'm so sensitive,i always stick out my thorn ,and hurt people when i'm not careful .Maybe i'm not fit to live in a crowd ,I should be alone.
#1
胖猫
[UzQmJCA]
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Today,iI had asmallspat with my roomie.aActually,iI haven't been very friendly to herall the time, maybe becauseiI think she is not beautiful or intelligent enough .I know it's stupid to judge a person byherapperarance and external condiction .
Why am so snobbish,(arrogant), whyiI acted like a jerk.
Allmenhumans are born equal,I can't act like a snob,ly, I shoudn't be snobbish (arrogant), it's wrong. I want to be nice, butiI'm so sensitive,iI always stick out my thorn,and hurt people wheniI'm not careful. MaybeiI'm notfit to live in a crowd ,socialized, I should be alone.
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By the way, I think the word of "arrogant" is more appropriate rather than "snobbish" in this case??
2018/04/18
#2
neko
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Yeah,you are right ,"arrogant" is more appropriate ,thanks for your advice.
2018/04/19
#3
ねこざむらい
[hwRFIw]
(非母語者)
April 18 wednesdayWednesday, April 18
Today,iI had asmallspat with my roomie.aActually,iI haven't been very friendly to her.all the time,It's maybe becauseiI don't think she isnotbeautiful or intelligent enough. I know it's stupid to judge a person by their apperaranceand external condiction.
Whyam so sobbish,whyiwas I so selfish? Why did I actedlike a jerk.?
Allmenpeople are born equal,I ca. I shouldn't act like a snob, because it's wrong. I want to be nice, butiI'm so sensitive,i. I always stickoutmy thorn,out and hurt peoplewhen i'm not careful .carelessly. MaybeiI'm not fittofor liveing in acgrowup,and,I should be left alone.
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2018/04/21
#4
[JUZUMFY]
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Reviced one is even worse (lol)
2018/04/21